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Eric: It is worth noting I often hear Oompa music when I read XKCD. I have no idea why.
(From Sarah Zero! Click on the update for full sized riddlin'!)
The thing about Sarah Zero is the soundtrack.
I can't describe it -- not really. There's only one language to articulate the music in your head, and while I can read music and I can imagine music, I can't write music. I don't have the theory, the understanding of the relationships. I can't take the music in my head and put it down on paper.
But reading Sarah Zero, I can hear it. So very, very clearly. I can hear the angry base, the distortion on the guitars. I can hear Randy Bachman fighting it out with Flea. Every panel, every page of Sarah Zero gets louder and angrier and sometimes quieter and sadder. Music evokes. Music entices. Music enflames. And music destroys.
What is it about Sarah Zero?
One of the things that happens in webcomics is graphic design. To be a webcartoonist you must create imagery, but to present imagery on a page you have to design that page. It may be web design or page design or print design but at its core it is graphic design, and a good number of fantastic artists make for terrible graphic designers. Despite everything, they are two different skillsets, and while some of that is language -- sometimes, the artist can see the web site in their head but they lack the XHTML and CSS to put it on the page -- a lot of it is a different sense of understanding. An understanding of whitespace, of navigation, of leading the eye. It's not just panel arrangement, it's comprehension.
In the old days, essays were called compositions. It's why we still take "English Composition" in college. And in the end, graphic design is to sequential art as composition is to writing. It is the framework, that presents the thesis. It is the structure that tells the story. It is the gateway into the brain.
We compose.
Just like the composer penning notes in 3/4 time, arranging measures and considering individual instruments. Each musician in the piece will be playing music, but if they all come together -- if they all play at exactly the right moments -- the whole weaves together into a tapestry vastly greater than any one piccolo player can produce.
One of the things about the artist? (The artist who identifies as both Stef and Ace Plughead, so takes your choice.) The artist is a graphic designer. This site is entirely devoted to the presentation of content. It doesn't use Flash or any weird barriers. It slams the visuals full size right into your brain, getting out of the way while remaining accessible.
So too there are the panels themselves. Each panel is self contained -- a statement that stands alone. The juxtaposition of text, image and concept. There aren't word balloons here. You're never sure if the voice you hear is literally or internally speaking. And there is no detail that seems to small not to work in. Have a look at page 264 -- two panel spread, but within the two panel spread you have a secondary layout; a grid format working in whitespace easily recognizable to a desktop publisher in 1992 and just as recognizable to a web developer today. Every word works into the grid, and at the same time every link and icon is its own angry satire. Panel 2 becomes almost Russian Realism as done for the MTV generation. Less defined, more defiant.
I burned through the whole archives. They lend themselves to that. And through it all, I heard the music.
I'll be honest -- part of me wonders if I should put Sarah Zero aside until it's finished. It's got such a strong sense of connection -- such a strong sense of one page building from the last, that reading a new page in near isolation doesn't seem to make a lot of sense to me. I'd forget too much of what I'd seen. I'd have to start anew every time. Possibly it's better to wait until the whole is done, and experience the composition in its entirety.
Either way, this is a Hell of a way to start a morning.
Posted by Eric Burns-White at August 27, 2008 10:39 AM
Comments
Comment from: miyaa
posted at August 27, 2008 11:12 AM
The artwork on page 298-299 is like something out of a John Woo movie, but put on something the size of an ESPN the Magazine spread. (Really large sports magazine size. I'd call it "jumbo tabloid.") The artwork really works well on a widescreen layout.
Comment from: Trevel
posted at August 27, 2008 11:39 AM
It doesn't fit nicely on my screen.
After reading the intro of how it's got good design, that's such an incredible disappointment. (And why, in the end, graphic web design is HARD.) Sure, it's probably my fault for having TWO rows of taskbar at the bottom, and using Firefox with an extra row used for tabs, and having a wide-screen laptop. (1440x900) And sure, I'm used to having to scroll the screen to read comics, which tend to favour a vertical orientation despite those working so poorly on computer monitors...
... but I expected better. Just this once.
I'll wait a few days before reading it again, so I don't have to begin on a disappointed note.
Comment from: Christopher B. Wright
posted at August 27, 2008 11:54 AM
It's definitely designed for a high-res screen.
Comment from: Eric Burns-White
posted at August 27, 2008 12:04 PM
That much is definitely true, and it may well detract from what is the strongest element going for it.
Comment from: Polychrome
posted at August 27, 2008 12:20 PM
Well, damn. That sure cleared out my sinuses. I'll have to let that sit for a while and come back to it every couple months. I don't think a page at a time would work for me.
And I didn't have any trouble on my 1280x1024 CRT.
Comment from: Morgan Wick
posted at August 27, 2008 3:31 PM
Any reason why this post doesn't have an actual title?
Comment from: siwangmu
posted at August 28, 2008 12:47 AM
You're back! I'm late to the party (and you never left, technically), but still. I believe I expressed my delight when you started up the check-in-on-authors project, but having just read through the last few weeks--"hey, look at this Achewood?" Literature-related pet peeve? Dentist- and sentiment-related personal vignettes? A little gaming and a little tech and a little reminiscence and...
I never came to Websnark because I thought I knew what I was about to read.
Very happy. (And also very happy for both of you, by the way. My somewhat-proximity to Vegas these days was making me sorely tempted to find out if you all were thinking of declaring any kind of public "throw rice at us" moment. My better instincts prevailed, but good wishes were mentally sent, so I take credit for any and all ensuing happiness.)
Final note, and I used to hate these personal, off-topic comments, so very sorry, all--you and Wednesday may both, of course, do whatever you darn well please, but if what you darn well please is to write something here, Weds, um, that would be keen and I look forward to it?
Now back to your regularly scheduled "I was also somewhat disappointed that my screen made me scroll sideways on the heralded graphic design site, but that's not really the site owner's fault at all."
Comment from: Ray Radlein
posted at September 3, 2008 3:36 AM
Works beautifully on both my 1280x1024 regular monitor, and my 1280x9-somethin' laptop. Can't imagine why it wouldn't display right on a 1440-width screen.
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